Good-Bye
64The tears well
They flow in dry paths down my cheek
Salty rivers guide the cries for help to the barrel
I breathe my last through you
Deep throating
Gagging in a fatal act of fellatio
I retch and swallow
The acrid taste of spent powder
My last bitter meal
The trigger is pulled
Heaven and hell dissolve
And I welcome
Sweet eternal slumber
____________© 2009 Richard L. Thorp Jr._________________
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I like it. Firearm felatio. Twisted and deadly.
well i can't see any difference. what exactly did you re-write? the copyright thingy?
You do it with flair, no doubt about it!!
Liked it then, like it now. Glad to see it back!
It's shorter than it was before, I think. Ola Pest.
"Gagging in a fatal act of fellatio" I love that line. Multi talented you are :)
WB Pest, you have been dearly missed. :) hugz
Welcome back Pest.
Keep on Hubbing!
Didn't frighten me this time...maybe cause I read it before...you...:O) Hugs
I don't actually understand it.... I am a bit dumb
Hope this isn't the time you actually mean it. There is a God who loves you, even when you don't love you.
Hello Again!
I've missed you Pest!
Pesty boy, you are one talented kid!
The analogy is certainly there! If you were going for erotic poetry you made your mark! It was strong and vivid. I like the analogy myself!
=o you are back?! Awesome!
"Deep throating"
That's very sexy. ;P
dude...wow. powerful, no doubt.
I hope the rivers have all leveled off and there is complete joy in your heart.
When are you coming back you little hunky racoon?
Hey it must hold some magic to you and other writers, thats all that matters, hey you got more comments with a hundred words than I get with a thousand. So I salute you. 10 hugs
Beautifully written! Awesome! Thanks for the great read!
Awesome poem, good thought.
I think this makes me sad....
Pest Hub Author 2 years ago
This is a re-write of mine.